The Golden Rule for Becoming a Better Writer
41 points by andsoitis 3 hours ago | 17 comments

wcfrobert 30 minutes ago
Completely agree! I find writing deeply memetic - in that I often catch myself imitating the flow, style, word choices, punctuation and grammar of whatever reading material I'm currently immersed in.

This unfortunately does not bode well for my writing ability as I read emails and Claude output all day. Recently, I've been reading a lot of building codes and compliance documents and I've develop annoying ticks like using "shall", "need not", "take no exception", overuse of passive voice, etc.

My hypothesis is engineers suck at writing by default unless they do extra-curricular reading. I read a lot! But sadly it's often textbooks, journal papers, documentations, and Claude. I'm envious of great writers, but I don't have time to read Keats. I'm immersed in Stewart, Strang, and whatever Claude is feeding me next.

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lanyard-textile 27 minutes ago
When new deltarune chapters come out, they definitely influence my writing and thoughts lol.

I find myself rewording things to avoid claude and chatgpt-isms. You don't realize how much you say "You're absolutely right" on a day to day basis...

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richardatlarge 14 minutes ago
Many hundreds of hours of reading will build your vocabulary, and tune your ear to the sound of a good sentence. But it will not make you a writer.

Reading as a person wanting to become a better writer should be more conscience of what they are reading. I often finish a novel and can't even remember if it was narrated, or how. That is not careful reading.

I've heard of authors who, went waiting for their muse, just copied novels they liked until they got back in the groove, and this usually helped.

Practice makes practice. Deliberate practice makes...

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js2 18 minutes ago
Hugh Howey on becoming a writer:

> Insight #4: The best writers are the best readers. There aren’t any shortcuts around this. Successful writers read. They read a lot. And the best writers read a wide variety of books. It’s impossible to stress the importance of this insight. When aspiring authors ask my advice on making it as a writer, this is my most common first response: Read.

https://hughhowey.com/writing-insights-part-one-becoming-a-w...

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m463 25 minutes ago
Reminds me of bill gates, who said to learn to write code, you have to read as much source code as you can.

[also, I can't also think about people who I know who talk talk talk (to hear the sound of their own voice?) and never listen... is this part of what he's implying?]

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leecommamichael 27 minutes ago
In addition to this, I think one gets even more from reading after having tried to write. There's a unique feedback loop that starts happening once you start creating.
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m463 23 minutes ago
Sometimes I wonder if too much looking behind the curtain might affect you. Like seeing how the restaurant prepares your food. Or seeing that much of apple's look and feel is rounded corners.
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randomImmigrant 20 minutes ago
I had an odd sense when reading that article… the sense that we’re in truly bizarre times, that such obvious advice needs to be given at all.

That people in general don’t read, I get. But if you don’t read, why would you want to write? Baffling!

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aetherspawn 2 hours ago
Woah. Reading this blog post was like being transported 5 years back prior to the existence of AI. It reeks of pure humanity.
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ngruhn 41 minutes ago
agree, despite the em dashes.
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jacobolus 29 minutes ago
For what it's worth, the linked article has only en dashes. (I have no idea whether LLMs use en dashes.)
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SunOrbiter1 2 hours ago
"To which I say this: fuck you, you’re not too busy." What's with the abuse? Is that the hallmark of a great writer as well? Fuck this, fuck that. Pathetic.

That said, good advice. Mediocre readers are mediocre writers. The reverse is not necessarily true. I've met many fantasy writers (hello Readercon!) who've read every damn series and then proceed to write yet another Tolkienesque knockoff. Their brains are pretty much like overtrained LLMs.

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dbtc 52 minutes ago
Perhaps what you're getting at is that being a good writer is not all it takes to make a good [art/story/work...], but I'm not unconvinced that reading is the key for the writing part.
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iainctduncan 53 minutes ago
You are quoting him out of context. That was directed at wannabe-writers who don't make time to read. Which is completely fucking batshit crazy. If anyone deserves some f-bombs, it's them.

Additionally, the very next sentence is "Joking. I would never say that. But I certainly fucking think it."

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SunOrbiter1 20 minutes ago
Who exactly is the advice for? For those who don't read, right? In that case, how does abusing them help? There's another golden rule about treating people the way--can't quite recall it, hmmm...

Casual obscenity has become so normalized in the culture, you probably feel outraged I'm even bringing it up. Not reading has also become normalized in just the same manner. No one reads if they can at all help it-- not at work, not in parks, not on the commute, and not for writing. Their loss, of course.

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popalchemist 37 minutes ago
Instant yawn and instant dismissal; I don't want advice from a psychologically stunted man-child.
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andsoitis 36 minutes ago
> Instant yawn and instant dismissal; I don't want advice from a psychologically stunted man-child.

So you don’t agree with his one golden rule for becoming a better writer?

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SadErn 20 minutes ago
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